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Nsweet · 04-25-2012, 08:15 AM

No no no, I just numbered evey sentence because I wanted to keep this down to ten sentences or less. Certainly not going to write this letter as it is here.

I wasn't sure about that first line but I decided it would work better to assume she would hold onto it.

04-25-2012, 08:15 AM	#14 (permalink)
Nsweet Member Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: Dallas, Tx Posts: 3,677	Re: Critique my D letter please! No no no, I just numbered evey sentence because I wanted to keep this down to ten sentences or less. Certainly not going to write this letter as it is here. I wasn't sure about that first line but I decided it would work better to assume she would hold onto it.